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noone here to care.. for
it wont be long
i have to stay strong for you

but this is all i have.. now
can you help me
im walking blindly past you

i just need your hand to stand ..up
to the challenge
im walking to the ledge now

will i fly?
will i fall?
will i lie or will i stall?!?!?
the ground i see
its all misty from up here
take my hand youll see..
but you might not even care!

take that first step foward..
getting closer now..
take that second step over
falling towards the ground!!!!




then i open my eyes.... to the world
that i thought was disguised.. from me untill
i really opened my eyes... and saw
that i cannot fly... i just fall!! down
                                      down
                                         down...
to
the
   ground....

down
   down
      down...

where i cant
           be
            found.  


my home so far away...
this place here so cold i stay
here untill i die..
never again to fly....
Ok.. im feeling too emotional right now.. im really upset.. second poem ive written this hour.. another song actually.. whatever.. i hate feeling liek this..
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grahamku's avatar
It does have a KoRn type feel to it. Wonderfully written though. You hav a tune for it or what?